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Glorious Confusion WIP by ~kotowaru-no-jisastu:iconkotowaru-no-jisastu:

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Glorious Confusion (WIP)

Confusion, confusion, oh sweet confusion
You have me binded and blinded
What would I ever do without you
Except for see the world straight
Thank you for this delightful bliss
Yet akward and enjoyable craziness
You have me all turned around
Making me see the world entirely upside down
You hold me in your very palms
And let me dance in circles
All within the cage that you have provided
Such utter chaos and blasphemy
And then again, such euphoria
I hope I never leave this dizziness
Oh how I can't bear to be separated again
From Confusion, my confusion, oh sweet confusion
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Ok--threw this together in like 2 seconds...it is definitely going to become something better, but I'll submit this for now to let everyone know that I'm not neglecting dA (even though I haven't updated my Journal in a while)....

If anyone want's to know about the inspiration of this poem, go ahead and ask me in a note or comment or whatever, and I'll reply (probably with a note)....

Btw, I encourage ideas for me!


(c) me, even though it's unfinished-I don't want it being stolen

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~Sapphire-Twilight:iconSapphire-Twilight: Feb 29, 2008, 5:41:14 PM
plenty nouns, enough verbs, maybe some adjectives next?

--
Be who you are, say what you feel. Those who matter don't mind, those who mind won't matter.

-Dr. Suess
~kotowaru-no-jisastu:iconkotowaru-no-jisastu: Mar 1, 2008, 8:39:55 AM
ah yes...that is always a factor I usually do last...I will keep that in mind when I finish it....thank you ^^

--
Addicted to heart break....
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